Sometimes I find endings to be the hardest part - especially since they are so important, since the end is the final taste of the story that will stay in the readers' mouth. For "TV Lullaby", I am still struggling to find an ending. In addition to the two endings in the two previous posts, I am also considering ending it at: "Amid the smell of lasagna and robes, silks robes, chiffon robes that you left that night, I wait for your body to fill the synapses.", but that seems a bit too sudden. I would like to find a closer sentence to follow "Amid....synapses", and close with that, but that closer sentence is eluding me - which is annoying, but ok, since, like many works on this blog, I consider "TV Lullaby" a work-in-progress.
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