Surrealism Process

In terms of my favorite drafts, currently it's a tie between http://bwpq.blogspot.com/2012/09/sd3.html and http://bwpq.blogspot.com/2012/09/she-laid-out-pieces-of-poetry-like_27.html

I also like the original one http://bwpq.blogspot.com/2012/09/surrealism.html but I wonder if it ends too seriously to make the mocking of surrealism work for the whole poem.

Anyhow, since this is also a process blog for me, I am sharing my "process". (God, that sounds so pretencious.)

Also, I've been reading (and listening to) a lot of Leonard Cohen recently - not to mention Jewish High Holiday liturgy, which, as a friend of mine pointed out, is essentially a lot of poetry (and song), making the Day of Atonement a 25-hour poetry jam.